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                  <text>LAKEHEAD UNIVERSITY
DEPARTMENT OF HISTORY

History Essay Guide
http://history.lakeheadu.ca

Contents
Introduction

1

General Formatting
Information
2
Originality in
Undergraduate
Essays

3

How to Use
Footnotes &amp;
Endnotes

4

Footnote &amp;
Endnote
Formatting

5

Footnote &amp;
Endnote Examples 5
Bibliographies

8

University
Regulations on
Academic
Dishonesty

8

Useful
Internet Links

© 2006
Lakehead University
Department History

8

Introduction
The purpose of this guide is to provide
you with general information about the
Department of History’s guidelines for
undergraduate history essays.
On the left side of this page, you will find
a “Table of Contents” indicating where
information can be found throughout this
guide.
Please note that some instructors may
require variations to the information
provided in this guide. When in doubt
about how your essays should be
formatted in a particular course, consult
your syllabus first and, if you are still
unsure, contact the instructor.

As is mentioned a number of times in this
guide, all students enrolled in history
courses are strongly encouraged to
purchase a copy of the latest edition of
Kate L. Turabian’s A Manual for Writers
of Term Papers, Theses, and
Dissertations (available in the University
Bookstore). The reason for this is simple:
while most basic formatting issues are
dealt with in this guide, not all have been.
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th
As you proceed into the 3 and 4 Years
of your program, the Turabian book will
be invaluable.

General Formatting Information
Unless otherwise indicated by your
course instructor, all essays written for
history courses at Lakehead University
must be:

Please note that APA and MLA methods
are not used by historians and are not
acceptable in papers submitted to
members of the History Department.

•

Typewritten in 12pt Times-New
Roman font;

•

Double-spaced;

•

Paginated;

•

Use 1” margins on all sides;

Serious students of History should also
become acquainted with Jacques Barzun
and Henry F. Graff, The Modern
Researcher (the latest edition of which is
also available in the Lakehead
University.

•

Be provided with footnotes (or
endnotes) and bibliography
composed in accordance with Kate
L. Turabian’s A Manual for Writers of
Term Papers, Theses, and
Dissertations. Note: The examples
provided in this guide are based on
th
the 6 edition.

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Originality in Undergraduate Essays
Most undergraduate students, lacking
access to large collections of unexploited
manuscripts and documents, will not
produce original pieces of historical
writing in the sense that they will unearth
new evidence or create completely new
solutions for long-standing historical
problems.

Suffrage Poster
circa 1916

“In written work, sloppy
English indicates sloppy
thinking.”

Each piece of writing is original,
however, if it clearly bears the impress of
the writer's own thinking (even though it
contains evidence, ideas, and arguments
drawn from the work of others, with
appropriate acknowledgement in
footnotes).
It is perfectly possible, and highly
commendable, to use the insights of
others in such a way as to arrive at new
insights of your own. The scope for
originality lies in the way in which the
question is tackled -- in the effort and
ingenuity used in tracking down available
sources of information, and in the
organisation, convincingness, and
intelligibility of the resulting piece of
writing. It is by these criteria that essays
will be judged:

Sources of Information
Do not depend upon general history
surveys, encyclopædias and textbooks;
seek more specialised books, articles,
and documents whenever possible.
Organisation

Lake Tambyln Bridge

An essay should have three parts:
i) An introductory section, of not more
than one or two paragraphs, indicating
how you intend to approach the question
and what you do and do not intend to
deal with;
ii) A body, comprising most of the paper,
where you present your arguments and
evidence in a logical manner, taking
each aspect of the subject in turn and
dealing with it fully before moving to the
next; and

iii) A conclusion, of not more than one or
two paragraphs, summing up your
answer. Be sure to provide a clearlystated conclusion.
Your thoughts (and hence your essay)
should be organised in such a way that
both of you and the reader know exactly
what each sentence and paragraph
contributes to the paper, and how each
part relates to the whole. With
organisation, your thoughts will flow
logically from one aspect of the subject
to the next, and the reader will follow
your lead. Experimenting with various
alternative outlines before you start
writing is one of the best means of
achieving a well-organised essay.
Convincingness
The most common fault in undergraduate
essays (and, indeed, in examinations) is
that of failing to answer the question
which was asked and instead answering
some related, but different, question. The
solution is to read the question very
carefully and be sure that you
understand precisely what is required.
This seems self-evident, but in fact
requires practice. Learn to recognise and
concentrate on the key words and
phrases in any question. Ten minutes of
concentrated thought before you open a
book can save you ten hours of fruitless,
because irrelevant, reading in the library.
A simple recital of facts will earn, at best,
a grade of "C" or "D". A good piece of
writing requires that the author apply the
facts (the evidence) in such a way as to
produce a reasoned argument.
As in any argument, you will probably
favour and stress one position more than
another, but in doing so you should at
least indicate your awareness of, and
reasons for rejecting or de-emphasising,
the other points of view.
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Intelligibility
The language that you should use should
be easily understandable and should
communicate precisely what you want to
say. It is for this reason, and not because
they are vitally important in themselves,
that grammar, spelling, and punctuation
require close attention. Choose your
words carefully and be sure you know
what they mean before using them. A
good dictionary is an indispensable tool
for any writer, whether novice or a Nobel
laureate. Other invaluable aids to the
achievement of intelligibility are Roget's
Thesaurus of English Words and Phrases
and H.W. Fowler's Modern English

Usage. If the question you are trying to
answer contains terms that may be
interpreted in various ways (e.g. "a
revolutionary development"), explain in
your introduction the range of meaning
you intend to apply to them in the course
of your paper.
In written work, sloppy English indicates
sloppy thinking.

Chancellor Paterson Library

How to use footnotes/endnotes
1. Where do I place them?
They may be placed EITHER at the
bottom of the page (when they are
known as footnotes) OR at the end of the
paper before the bibliography (when they
are known as endnotes).
2. When do I provide a footnote or
endnote?
a) When you copy more than two or
three consecutive words from a book,
article, or any other source, YOU MUST
PLACE these words in quotation marks
and provide a footnote/endnote. Such
direct quotations should:
i)
ii)
iii)

consist of the exact words of the
source;
fit grammatically;
be used sparingly. If more than
one-fifth of your paper consists
of direct quotations, concentrate
more on using your own words.

expressing it in your own words (which
you should try to do as much as
possible) no quotation marks are
necessary, but a footnote/endnote
should be provided.
Footnotes/endnotes are simply form of
intellectual honesty and should be
regarded as such. It is better to err in the
side of too many, rather than too few
footnotes/endnotes per page, though this
will vary considerably with the nature of
the topic, the sources being used, and
your particular approach to the topic of
question.
PLAGIARISM IS TO BE AVOIDED AT
ALL COSTS, AND WILL BE VERY
SEVERELY DEALT WITH SHOULD IT
OCCUR.
See page 8 for more information on
Plagiarism.
See the next page for Footnote/Endnote
Formatting.

b) When you are borrowing an idea or
information from a book, etc. but

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Remember: It is better
to over-footnote than
under-footnote. Err on
the side of caution.

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Footnote/Endnote Formatting
Footnotes are useful
for the following
purposes:
To identify quotations;
To acknowledge
indebtedness for words
or ideas borrowed;
To indicate where
additional evidence or
comment may be found
in printed books and
other authoritative
sources;
To furnish additional
material or discussion
which is pertinent
(otherwise it should not
be mentioned at all) but
which would disturb the
proportions of the text if
included there;
To refer to other parts of
the treatise itself;

1. These may be placed at the bottom of
the page or at the end of the paper
before the bibliography as endnotes.
2. In terms of number, err on the side of
caution, that is, over-footnote rather than
under-footnote.
3. Number footnotes consecutively, i.e.
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6 . . .
4. Do not collapse footnotes -- e.g.
Smith, . . . 50-60 – instead write out a
new footnote every time you change
pages. You can save time and space
when you cite different pages from the
same source consecutively by using
Ibid. For example,

Each book must be footnoted in its full
citation only once. Thereafter, you can
use the author's name, comma, page
number. e.g. Smith, 50.
If one author has written more than one
book, you must also include the name of
the book.
Place the footnote after the first sentence
containing the relevant information from
the new source. The reader will assume
that all the information in the sentence up
to the sentence ending in the next
footnote is either from the same page of
the same or your own original work.

Smith, . . ., 50.
Ibid., 52.
Ibid., 56.
Ibid., 60.

Footnote/Endnote Examples
References to Books and Pamphlets
The complete form of a footnote reference to a printed book includes the following
details in this order and with the punctuation indicated:
a. the author's name (given name or initials first), followed by a comma;
b. the title of the book, underlined, followed by a comma;
c. the name of the editor or translator (if any), preceded by the abbreviation
"ed." or "trans.", and followed by a comma;
d. the number of the edition used (if not the first), followed by a semicolon;
e. the name of the place of publication, followed by a colon;
f. the name of the publisher, followed by a comma;
g. the year of publication, followed by a comma;
h. the volume number in capital Roman numerals (if the edition used consists of
more than one volume), followed by a comma;
i. the number(s) of the page(s) to which particular reference is made -- unless
the work has more than one volume -- and followed by a period.
The abbreviation "Vol." is not normally used in a footnote reference, and it is standard
practice to omit "p." and "pp." in reference to works of more than one volume. Thus "II,
171-182" means "Volume II, pages 171 to 182". Many scholars prefer to enclose
items (d), (e), (f), and (g) within parentheses, omitting the comma after (c).
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A footnote containing most of these items looks like this if it is to go into typewritten
discussion:
2. G.E. Lessing, The Education of the Human Race, trans. F.W. Robertson (4th ed.;
London: Kegan Paul, Trench, 1883), 47.
Reference to Periodicals and Newspapers
The complete form of a footnote reference to an article in a periodical includes the
following details in this order and with the punctuation indicated:
a. The author's name (given name or initials first) followed by a comma;
b. The title of the article in double quotation marks, followed by a comma;
c. The title of the periodical underlined, followed by a comma;
d. The volume number in capital Roman numerals;
e. The date of the issue or volume to which reference is made, enclosed in
parentheses and followed by a colon;
f. The number of the page or pages to which particular reference is made, followed
by a period.
A footnote containing all these items should appear in this form:

First World War
Recruiting Poster

7. W.C.D Pacey, "Balzac and Thackeray," Modern Language Review, XXXVI (1941):
213-224.
Additional Examples
Work by one author:
1. Gilbert Norwood, Platus and Terence (New York: Longmans, Green, 1932), 53.
Work by three authors:
2. H.R. Plomer, G.H. Bushnell, and E.R. McC. Dix. A Dictionary of the Printers and
Booksellers Who Were at Work in England, Scotland and Ireland from 1726 to 1775
(Oxford: University Press, for the Bibliographical Society, 1932), 206.
Work by more than three authors:
3. W.H. Auden and others, The Internet of the Critic (Princeton: Princeton University
Press, 1941), 27.
Work in several volumes, each with separate subtitle:
4. Reuben Gold Thwaites, ed., The Jesuit Relations and Allied Documents, Vol. XLV:
Lower Canada, Acadia, Iroquois, Ottawas: 1659-1660 (Cleveland: Burrows, 1899), 2025.
Pamphlet (one of series not issued at regular intervals):
5. A.E. Stamp, Methods of Chronology, Historical Association Leaflet, No. 92 (London:
Bell, 1933), 5.
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“Clarity. Clarity. Clarity.
When you become
hopelessly mired in a
sentence, it is best to
start fresh."
From Strunk and
White’s The Elements
of Style

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Recent edition of early printed work:

“Writing is long periods
of thinking and short
periods of writing.”
- Ernest Hemingway

6. Lewes Lavater, Of Ghosts and Spirites Walking by Nyght (1572) ed. J. Dover
Wilson and May Yardley (Oxford: University Press, for the Shakespeare Association,
1929), 88-97.
Early manuscript document printed in a collection:
7. Cotton, Mather. "A Brand Pluck'd out of the Burning" (1693), in George Lincoln Burr,
ed., Narratives of the Witchcraft Cases 1684-1706 (New York: Charles Scribner's
Sons, [1914], 259-287.
Published diaries and letters:
8. Henry Kelsey, The Kelsey Papers, intro. Arthur G. Doughty and Chester Martin
(Ottawa: The Public Archives of Canada and The Public Record Office of Northern
Ireland, 1929), 19-25.
9. Diary of the First Earl of Egmont, Hist. MSS. Comm. (London: H.M. Stationery
Office, 1923), II, 161.
Collection of readings:
10. William Smith Clark II, ed., Chief Patterns of World Drama (Boston: Houghton
Mifflin, [1946]), 406.
Work in foreign language:
11. Henri Bresson, La Religion des classiques 1660-1685 (Paris: Presses
Universitaires de France, 1948), 47-52.
12. Karl Kerényi, Romandichtung und Mythologie (Zurich: Reinverlag, 1945), 19.
13. Benedetto Croce, Nuovi saggi di estetica (Bari: Laterza, 1920), 34-41.
Translation:

Cover of Canadian
Aviation Magazine,
circa 1941-1945.
Featured is the Fort
William produced
“Hurricane Bomber”

14. Kuno Fischer, A Critique of Kant, trans. W.S. Hough (London: Swan
Sonnenschein, Lowery, 1888), 37-40.
Article in periodical or annual volume:
15. "Some Account of the Harleian Collection of Manuscripts," Annual Register, VI
(1763), 140-155.
16. William M. Clyde, "Parliament and the Press," Library, ser. 4, XIII (1933), 395-424.
17. Watson Kirkconnell, "Six Sixteenth-Century Forerunners of Milton's Samson
Agonistes," Trans. Roy. Soc. Can., ser. 3, XLIII (June 1949), Section II, 73-85.
Unsigned newspaper article:
18. "U.S. Statement and Shipkov Affidavit on Bulgaria," New York Times, March 5,
1950, sec. 1, 46-47.
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Essay in a collection by one author:

19. Irving Babbitt, "Humanist and Specialist", in his Spanish Character and Other
Essays (Boston: Houghton Mifflin, 1940), 183-197.
Contribution to single-volume miscellany by various authors:
20. Herbert Davis, "The Manuscript of Swift's Sermon on Brotherly Love," in Pope and
His Contemporaries, eds. James L. Clifford and Louis A. Landa, (Oxford: Clarendon
Press, 1949), 147-158.
Article in encyclopaedia or similar compilation:
21. F.E. S[kone] J[ames], "Copyright", Encyclopaedia Britannica, 14th ed. (1929), V,
413-418. [Or abbreviate title" Ency. Brit.]
Parliamentary records:
22. House of Lords Debates, 5th ser., 138 (1945-46), 692-695.
23. Canada, Parliament, House of Commons, Official Report of Debates, October 15,
1930, 5632.

A Note on Internet
Sources
Many instructors do not
allow the use of Internet
sources. However, if
allowed the following
information must be
provided:
•
•
•

24. Congressional Record, 79th Cong., 1st sess., 91:5 (June 15, 1945), 6087.
25. Testimony of William Johnson, Parliamentary History of England (London, 1803),
XVII, cols. 1078-1110.

•

Statute:

•

26. 12 George II, c. 36, s. 4. [Or, 12 George II, c. 36. s. 4.]

•

Law report:

Author's name;
Title of document,
in quotation marks;
Title of complete
work (if relevant), in
italics or underlined;
Date of publication
or last revision;
URL, in angle
brackets;
Date of access, in
parentheses;

Internet Documents (Website):

Do not use a site that
cannot provide all of the
above information. Also,
you must exercise the
same judgment in
evaluating an Internet
site as you would any
other source. The onus
is on the researcher to
make sure the
information, and those
providing it, can be
trusted.

31. Gail Mortimer, The William Faulkner Society Home Page, 16 September 1999,
&lt;http://www.utep.edu/mortimer/faulkner/main faulkner.htm&gt; (Accessed 19 November
1997).

If in doubt, contact your
instructor.

27. Gyles v. Wilcox (1740), 2 Atk. 141, Barn. C. 368.
Unpublished manuscript:
28. Public Archives of Nova Scotia, Manuscript Documents, vol. 35, dc. 2, Cornwallis
to Lords of Trade, July 24, 1749.
29. Bodleian Librarian, Rawlinson MSS., J, fol. 6.
Unpublished dissertation:
30. E.C. Morgan, "The Public Career of Joseph Addison" (Ph.D. diss., University of
North Carolina, 1941), 196.

Internet Documents (E-Journal):
32. Tonya Browning, "Embedded Visuals: Student Design in Web Spaces," Kairos: A

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“Plagiarism” shall be
deemed to include:
1.

Plagiarism of ideas
where an idea of an
author or speaker is
incorporated into the
body of an assignment as
through it were the
writer’s idea, i.e. no credit
is given the person
through referencing or

Journal for Teachers of Writing in Webbed Environments 3, no. 1 (1997),
&lt;http://english.ttu.edu/kairos /2.1/features/browning/index.html&gt; (Accessed 21
October 1999).
Internet Documents (Newspaper):
33. Christopher Wren, "A Body on Mt. Everest, a Mystery Half-Solved," New York
Times on the Web, 5 May 1999,
&lt;http://search.nytimes.com/search/daily/bin/fastweb?getdoc+site+
site+87604+0+wAAA+%22a%7Ebody%7Eon%7Emt.%7Eeverest%22&gt; (Acessed13
May 1999).

Bibliographies

See a style guide for further citation examples, or consult your instructor.
This should consist of an alphabetical listing, by author's surname, of all sources
cited in your footnotes/endnotes, and only of these sources.

footnoting or endnoting.
2.

Plagiarism of words
occurs when phrases,
sentences, tables, or
illustrations of an author
are incorporated into the
body of a writer’s own,
i.e. no quotations or
indentations (depending
on the format followed)
are present but
referencing or footnoting
or endnoting is given.

3.

Plagiarism of ideas and
words where words and
idea(s) of an author or
speaker are incorporated
into the body of a written
assignment as though

University Regulations on Academic Dishonesty*
“The University takes a most serious
view of offences against academic
honesty such as plagiarism (see side
panel), cheating, and impersonation.
Penalties for dealing with such offences
will be strictly enforced.
A copy of the “Code of Student
Behaviour and Disciplinary Procedures”
including sections on plagiarism and
other forms of misconduct may be
obtained from the Office of the Registrar.
The following rules shall govern the
treatment of candidates who have been
found guilty of attempting to obtain
academic credit dishonestly.
a) The minimum penalty for a
candidate found guilty of
plagiarism, or of cheating on any
part of a course, will be a zero

for the work concerned.
b) A candidate found guilty of
cheating on a formal
examination or a test, or of a
serious or repeated plagiarism,
or of unofficially obtaining a copy
of an examination paper before
the examination is scheduled to
be written, will receive a zero for
the course and may be expelled
from the University.
Students disciplined under the “Code of
Student Behaviour and Disciplinary
Procedures” may appeal their case
through the judicial panel.”

* From the Lakehead University
Calendar available online at
http://www/lakeheadu.ca/calendar/

they were the writer’s
own words and ideas, i.e.
no quotations or
indentations (depending
on format followed) are
present and no
referencing or footnoting
or endnoting is given.
From
www.lakeheadu.ca/calendar/

Useful Internet Links
Lakehead University Writing Centre
http://writingcentre.lakeheadu.ca/
Lakehead University Learning Assistance Centre
http://learningassistance.lakeheadu.ca/
Lakehead University Library
http://library.lakeheadu.ca/
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