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Course Code and Cohort: Click here to enter text.
Assignment Name: Click here to enter text.
Vocabulary / Word Choice
☐ Some words are used incorrectly
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☐ Uses teaching terms incorrectly
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☐ While/Although
☐ There/their/they’re
☐ Lets/let’s
☐ As/because/since
☐ To/too/two
☐ Constantly/always vs
consistently
☐ Either/or; neither/nor
☐ Your/you’re
☐ Based off vs based on/ upon
☐ That/which
☐ Its/it’s
☐ Incorrect past-tense construction: (spelt/learnt/dreamt)
☐ Incorrect plural or possessive construction: (s/’s/s’)
Sentence Structure
Awkward clause order or awkward sentences
Run-on sentences
Incomplete sentences
Sentences or clauses that end with prepositions
Inconsistent or improper tense use/agreement (past/present/future)
Pronoun agreement errors (including he/she vs their or they)
Singular-plural agreement errors
Inconsistent use of singular-plural or non-agreement
Inconsistent use of first, second, or third perspective, or perspective is sometimes confusing,
or use of vague, universal pronouns (the societal We, for example)
☐ Non-parallel clausal structure

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Punctuation and Conventions
Errors in spelling
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Capitalization errors
End punctuation errors
Incorrect or inconsistent use of commas – comma splices or doesn’t use the Oxford comma
for lists
☐ Incorrect use of semicolons or colons
☐ Incorrect use of quotation marks or errors in quotation mark use
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